This Passage was about this girl (Lisa Hoffman) having a gambling problem.
It also was about the hard ships she had with not gambling again.
Then it explains how she came form a long line of gamblers and how that went bankrupted because of their problem.
Its also talked about her having to get help because she lost everything.
And how to stay on track with not gambling again.
Good summary. Pay close attention to sentence fragments-- just like we worked in our rBooks. 'And how to stay on track with not gambling again' is a fragment. It could be revised: 'This passage also discusses how people can stay on track and not gamble again."
ReplyDeleteRemember to now add your thoughts/ reader response. You may write about your predictions for what will happen next, your connections to the story, the meaning of your favorite quote, etc. Stay focused in class or find time outside of school to create 3 blog posts each week!